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B-School Success (Admitted to Thunderbird) |
"GREAT NEWS!! I started my application preparations only 6 weeks ago and applied for Thunderbird on time before the 15th of July to start this fall. Yesterday I got the answer that I'm accepted and that I'm expected there on the 27th of August!!!!!! Thanks a lot for your great input. The Dean of Admissions referred to some parts of the essay in her letter. So I left a mark.... Great stuff and thanks again."
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Recommendation
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