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B-School Success (Admitted to HBS) |
"Probably the most important factor of admission success is the people you are working with when preparing your application. I had three of your editors and all were phenomenal. When working with them I was all the time convinced that I am not one of hundreds of customers, but the one they were thinking of and trying to walk in my shoes when criticizing my essays. Extremely good service. Thanks."
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Scholarship
Essay Editing Services Service
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Your Essay!
Scholarship selection committees place more emphasis on the scholarship essay than admissions officers place on the
personal statement. Often, there are only one or two large cash prizes per scholarship and hundreds of applicants, making scholarships much harder to win than admission to a top
MBA program.
Needless to say, it is not easy to win thousands of dollars for simply writing an essay. However, most applicants are not nearly as careful or ambitious as the few people who are actually contenders for these scholarships.
With the Premium Harvard-Educated Scholarship Editing
Service, EssayEdge's dedicated team of Harvard-educated essayists will spend
hours on each essay
suggesting content improvements, correcting grammatical and stylistic errors,
and recommending ways to make your essays stand out. Giving your essays the
structure, balance, and impact you need, our editors will dramatically improve your
scholarship application.
Unlike other sites, our editors
do not merely write a critique of your essays; instead, they actually correct and make
changes to your essays while maintaining your unique voice. Order today to put the Net's most
talented team of business school statement editors to work for you!
Service Details:
For one low fee EssayEdge provides a full edit and critique of all essays in
a single application. Our editors will return the edit and critique by email within
24 or 48 hours. Please read the service details below:
- Content - Impressing
the selection
committee
- We improve the coherency of your essay by relying on personal details,
not abstract generalizations, to convince the selection committee
of your favorable characteristics, potential, and, if necessary, your need.
- We ensure that you present yourself as an accomplished, forthright,
and thoughtful applicant by clearly articulating your leadership
ability, career-focus, and potential for success in high-level
management.
- We focus the essay to directly address the question, and we make certain
that the logic and organization of the essay flow naturally from the topic.
- Compelling Language
- Making your essay memorable
- Reviewers spend no more than a few minutes reading each
essay. With hundreds of applicants and only a few awards, you must capture
their attention from the first word.
- We help draw the reader into the narrative through vivid, compelling
language and a strong voice. We counter the tendency of many
business school applicants to write dull laundry lists of accomplishments and
experiences.
- We ensure that the introduction engages the reader and provides a good
first impression. We edit the conclusion to avoid mere summary and to
establish a sense of closure and balance in the essay.
- Tone - Preserving
your voice
- Editing is about strengthening your voice, not replacing it. Our 200+
editors check that your prose consistently conveys the attractive
aspects of your personality.
- We help you communicate to the selection
committee that you are not only a
GMAT score and a transcript but also a real-life engaging personality
and a talented business leader.
- Wordiness - Omitting
the irrelevant
- Since you have weeks to write a few relatively short essays, they must
be flawless and on topic. We reword awkward sentences and correct for
verbosity and rambling.
- We subject each sentence to a strict relevancy test. Any words,
phrases, sentences, or paragraphs that do not improve your essay are
dramatically restructured.
- Flow - Improving
transition, structure, and readability
- We improve your essay's logical progression, allowing a hurried reader
to distill the most important facets of your background. We check that your sentences together form cohesive paragraphs, and that your paragraphs together form a cohesive essay.
- We vary your sentence structure where necessary and insert transition
to ensure the lucidity of your argument.
- We verify that your paragraphs signal natural breaks in your thought
progression and that you do not have too many or too few paragraphs. We
clarify topic sentences and emphasize supporting details.
- Grammar, Mechanics,
Word Choice - Editing at the lowest level
- There is no excuse for grammatical errors, spelling mistakes, run-on
sentences, or fragments. We correct all such mistakes.
- We also correct word choice errors, catching subtle mistakes like
improper use of prepositions.
- Multiple Essays -
Increasing the synergies of a single application’s essays
- Some scholarships
require multiple essays. We ensure that each essay presents a different
but consistent image of your personality.
- We place the shorter essays in the context of the longer personal
statements, making certain your application does not communicate
contradictory information.
- Deadline, Critique,
Support, and Privacy - Providing more than an edit
- We return your edited essay and critique within 48 hours or within 24
hours if you pay an additional fee. We offer these fast turnaround times
24 hours a day, 7 days a week, 365 days a year.
- The critique explains reasons for major stylistic and thematic
adjustments to your essay. Critiques also suggest further content
improvements and rate the essay’s overall effectiveness.
- You may ask clarifying questions of your editors by email once you
receive your edit and critique.
- We protect your privacy. View our business
principles.
If you are not
convinced we can help you write a better scholarship
essay, please view samples
of our work or read about our
customers' success in the application process.
Fee
Structure:
| Application Word Count (definition) | Low Flat Fee
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| 0 - 250 words | $104.95 |
| 251 - 600 words | $124.95 |
| 601 - 900 words | $144.95 |
| 901 - 1200 words | $164.95 |
| 1201 - 1500 words | $184.95 |
| 1501 - 2000 words | $204.95 |
| 2001 - 2500 words | $234.95 |
| 2501 - 3000 words | $264.95 |
| 3001 - 4000 words | $324.95 |
| 4001 - 5000 words | $384.95 |
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Please Note: Fees
are based on the total word count of the original essays that you send to
EssayEdge.
All essays submitted in one order must be for a single
scholarship
application.
To order the service,
simply submit the
below form. You will
then be asked to submit your essay(s) and pay
securely with Visa, MasterCard, American Express, Discover, or Paypal®. You may also pay by check, money order, or wire transfer.
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