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Lesson
Two: Law Statement Themes
Compared
with other professional schools, law schools generally leave their essay
guidelines quite open-ended. Their prompts often boil down to "Tell
us something about yourself that the rest of your application does not."
In this sense, law school personal statements resemble college admissions
essays.
Yet, there is one
distinct difference: As a law school applicant, you are expected to be
more mature and to have a clearer idea of your goals. If the question
posed does not ask why you want to attend law school, don't think this
is some kind of trick. As some of our admissions officers' comments show,
many of them genuinely do not feel this is a necessary topic to address.
On the other hand, do not ignore instructions if the school does ask for
your reasons. People who are switching careers may be held to an even
higher standard. In these cases, admissions readers will want to know
your precise reasons in order to comprehend your candidacy fully.
In the first section
of this lesson, we discuss strategies for emphasizing your unique qualities.
In the second section, we offer guidelines for how to articulate your
motivation for pursuing law. In the third section, we discuss ways to
demonstrate your qualifications for the study of law. Finally, in the
fourth section, we give you tips for how to tackle the issue-based essay.
Select One:
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Extra: Explain Low Grades or Scores
"For
some applicants there are anomalous factors or events that they
might want to tell us about--that bout with mononucleosis during
the sophomore year that caused their grades to go down one semester
or their history of poor standardized testing. I would discourage
applicants from using their personal statement to discuss such
anomalies. Instead, applicants should prepare an addendum--a separate
piece of paper that they attach to their personal statement, entitled
"My Sophomore Year," for example, and write a few paragraphs
to concentrate on that particular anomaly."
-Admissions Officer, University of California at Berkeley School
of Law
Just
about all schools will accept such an addendum, but you should
call the admissions office to clarify the policy. What's certain
is that no good can come from discussing negatives in your personal
statement. That space should be reserved for making a positive
argument for your candidacy. Another point you should keep in
mind is whether you have a valid reason. Staying up late the night
before the LSAT is not a legitimate reason for a bad performance,
while documented sickness could be. A particularly bad semester
could be explained by a death or illness in the family.
There
are many more gray areas. For example, it is worth noting that
you simply have a bad history of standardized testing? Doing so
tactfully (in other words, don't rail against the arbitrariness
of tests or demand the right to be considered for your grades
alone) can help the schools understand your exact situation, but
it most likely won't have a substantial effect on their perspective
(they know to take into account the imprecision of standardized
tests). What about the class for which you simply did not grasp
the material, or a sub-par GPA during your freshman year? Again,
what you have to say won't constitute an extenuating circumstance,
since everyone has weaknesses and faces the same challenge of
adjusting to college. Your best approach is to transform such
blemishes into something positive by pointing out particular courses
in which you performed well, especially those that were more advanced,
more relevant to your intended career path, or more recent.
Finally,
make sure that you do not take a contentious tone. Don't accuse
your teachers of unfair grading standards or complain about a
lack of extracurricular opportunities at your school. Be clear
that you're not trying to excuse yourself of responsibility, but
emphasize that you simply want the school to have the complete
picture.
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