Sample College Essay and Graduate School Personal Statement Editing

Each of the edited essays listed below won admission to the client's first choice school. We have posted many different examples because the only way to understand the quality of EssayEdge editing is to note the improvement made to various types of essays. Also, please bear in mind the quality of the original version to understand the dramatic improvement made to each essay.

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College




Subject Matter: Father's Sickness

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Graduate




Subject Matter: Literary Criticism

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MBA




Subject Matter: Career Decisions & Significant Events

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Law




Subject Matter: Why Law?

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Medical




Subject Matter: Residency Experience

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