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Personal Statement Editing Services

Our editors work to improve your statement to be clear, consistent, and free of mistakes. Let's make your unique story correspond to the admission standards!

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Statements Edited
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12 000 happy clients got accepted to 700 educational institutions, including Ivy League.

10/10 service rate
It was a 5-star experience for me! My editor's comments are insightful, thoughtful, and very encouraging. His help truly dramatically improves my essay, and I would definitely recommend EssayEdge to my friends. Thank you Scott.
October 2021
Mizuki K.
Harvard University
Harvard University
10/10 service rate
Thank you for brushing up my persona statement. Now it looks much better in grammar and also construction is more natural.
November 2020
Christopher B.
Stanford University
Stanford University
10/10 service rate
I enjoyed reading the essay after the editor went through. She made it sound much more fluid,professional and clear. The best part was it still sounded like me and I got my message across loud and clear.
December 2021
Becky G.
Northwestern University
Northwestern University
10/10 service rate
I am very satisified with EssayEdge and my editor Anna. She gave me a very quick feedback within only a few hours. She polished my language and made my essay more eloquent. I really appreciate her work.
February 2022
Richard W.
Massachusetts Institute of Technology
Massachusetts Institute of Technology
10/10 service rate
I am a first time user and I was doubtful that my order might not be delivered on time (within 24 hours). But I I received awesome edits and feedback prior the deadline. Thanks for meeting the client's expectations, especially the guaranteed timeframe.
April 2021
Anna C.
University of California-Berkeley
University of California-Berkeley
10/10 service rate
Quick return and accurate grammatical correction is wonderful! My document seems more compelling now. Thank you, Ashley!
June 2021
Jamie S.
Columbia University
Columbia University
10/10 service rate
The critique was very positive and constructive and my editor asked some key questions which I took for granted that the reader should know what context Im talking about. I wish I had discovered this service earlier. I will definitely use it one more time.
May 2020
Luke D.
Yale University
Yale University
10/10 service rate
I was very satisfied with the edits, as well as with my editor's comments. They were clearly well thought out and my editor put effort into making my essay better. I have another essay and I will be sending it in for review. Thank you, Brandon.
October 2021
Brenda Z.
University of Southern California
University of Southern California
10/10 service rate
It was a 5-star experience for me! My editor's comments are insightful, thoughtful, and very encouraging. His help truly dramatically improves my essay, and I would definitely recommend EssayEdge to my friends. Thank you Scott.
October 2021
Mizuki K.
Harvard University
Harvard University
10/10 service rate
Thank you for brushing up my persona statement. Now it looks much better in grammar and also construction is more natural.
November 2020
Christopher B.
Stanford University
Stanford University
10/10 service rate
I enjoyed reading the essay after the editor went through. She made it sound much more fluid,professional and clear. The best part was it still sounded like me and I got my message across loud and clear.
December 2021
Becky G.
Northwestern University
Northwestern University
10/10 service rate
I am very satisified with EssayEdge and my editor Anna. She gave me a very quick feedback within only a few hours. She polished my language and made my essay more eloquent. I really appreciate her work.
February 2022
Richard W.
Massachusetts Institute of Technology
Massachusetts Institute of Technology
10/10 service rate
I am a first time user and I was doubtful that my order might not be delivered on time (within 24 hours). But I I received awesome edits and feedback prior the deadline. Thanks for meeting the client's expectations, especially the guaranteed timeframe.
April 2021
Anna C.
University of California-Berkeley
University of California-Berkeley
10/10 service rate
Quick return and accurate grammatical correction is wonderful! My document seems more compelling now. Thank you, Ashley!
June 2021
Jamie S.
Columbia University
Columbia University
10/10 service rate
The critique was very positive and constructive and my editor asked some key questions which I took for granted that the reader should know what context Im talking about. I wish I had discovered this service earlier. I will definitely use it one more time.
May 2020
Luke D.
Yale University
Yale University
10/10 service rate
I was very satisfied with the edits, as well as with my editor's comments. They were clearly well thought out and my editor put effort into making my essay better. I have another essay and I will be sending it in for review. Thank you, Brandon.
October 2021
Brenda Z.
University of Southern California
University of Southern California
FEATURES

How Can EssayEdge Improve Your Personal Statement?

Perfect Grammar & Punctuation
EssayEdge editors will make your essay free of grammatical and punctuation mistakes. Our specialists focus on eliminating all errors, weaknesses, and possible inconsistencies, preserving your unique voice at the same time.
Law always has fasinating questions presents fascinating questions that need to be answered, and I find myself Enjoying thoroughly enjoy the process of investigating and answering these continuous questions.
GoingSUGGESTIONGoing → Making this change without those skills was a huge problem. When freshman year ended, I had learned how to study, formed relationships with my teachers, and developed a processSUGGESTIONProcess → Method to effectively manageSUGGESTIONEffectively manage my time → Manage my time effectively my time.
Brilliant Stylistics
Our editors highlight the importance of tone and exposition in your essay. They will make the vocabulary check, considering all specific language constructions to make your essay written like a native.
Expert Comments and Recommendations
The professional guidance and recommendations of our editors aim to boost the quality of your text. Together with editing and proofreading services, EssayEsge editors give useful advice on how to improve your admission paper according to the requirements of the chosen educational institution.
“I believe that doctors not only need to help the patients get cured from their disease but also need to make sure the patient is feeling comfortable there.” Editor’s recommendation:Phrases like “I think that” or “I believe that” act as unnecessary qualifiers in your writing. Simply state your ideas as fact, and your writing becomes more persuasive.
YOUR STATEMENT
EDITOR’S CRITIQUE[Paragraph 1] Mom and Dad In the descriptions of your parents, the capitalization scheme has been adapted to reflect mainstream usage. When you refer to a parent using a pronoun (e.g. "my mom," "my dad"), the word "mom" or "dad" remains in lower case. But when you refer to a parent using the word "Mom" or "Dad" as a name (e.g. "I knew this...
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Critique Part
EssayEdge editors emphasize the weaknesses and flaws of your essay. A detailed critique of each paragraph that offers writing suggestions based on what your editor corrected and constructive recommendations will help you further enhance the essay on your own.
Brainstorming Session
Do not have any idea on how to start your essay? With our Premier package, you will get a PRO service offering a personalized approach to the Client. During one-to-one consultation, the editor will help formulate your ideas according to the topic and type of admission document.
CLIENT
I need to write a personal statement that shows my experiences contributed to my decision to pursue a career in healthcare. What should I include and how should I start? EDITORI recommend that you include some deeper discussion of what your training thus far has been like. You frequently express your joy and contentment, but I encourage you to provide more detail about study or practice experiences that you had that confirmed your decision and demonstrated your skill, not just your delight. Once you were actually in your chosen field, how did what you experienced build on your commitment? Did you find another mentor or other inspiring figures beyond your friend’s father?

WHAT DOES A SAMPLE LOOK LIKE?

If you want to submit a good personal statement, you need to describe your ambitions, skills, and expirience in an interesting and unconventional way. Our editors can proofread and edit your essay, as well as point out the parts of the text that could be improved.

Introduction

Introduce yourself and explain why you want to apply to this particular school or program.

Body Paragraph 1
Tell the admission officer about the experience that has developed your understanding of the subject.
Body Paragraph 2
Describe your goals and ambitions, as well as the challenges and struggles you have encountered.
Body Paragraph 3
Speak about your hobbies, interests, and extracurricular activities that can help you stand out from the other applicants and show your different sides.
Conclusion
Underline the key points of your personal statement and show how this course or educational institution can help reach your goals.
Our Team

Work With Professional Editors

Our customers come back to us because our editors do their best to see our students succeed. They provide unrivaled help, guiding students through the application process.

Amy A. - a member of the Team Essay Editors at EssayEdge Amy A.
19 years of experience
B.A. in Human Biology
Stanford University

"What started out as a part-time job to pay for my college tuition quickly grew into a passion for admissions essay editing and counseling."

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7 years of experience
B.A. in Human Biology
University College London

"My aim is to ensure your unique skills, experience, and attributes are highlighted and shine through in your essays."

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Anna S. - a member of the Team Essay Editors at EssayEdge Anna S.
21 years of experience
B.A. in Human Biology
Yale University

"I perfect a client's writing while also addressing critical areas that need improvement, all while maintaining the client's unique voice."

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Ashley R. - a member of the Team Essay Editors at EssayEdge Ashley R.
13 years of experience
B.A. in Human Biology
Yale University

"I have a unique perspective on the college admissions process and on the job application process."

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3 years of experience
B.A. in Human Biology
MIT

"I am excited to help take your writing to the next level."

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Brian P.
10 years of experience
B.A. in Human Biology
Columbia University

"Let’s get your essay equipped to climb new heights!"

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4 years of experience
B.A. in Human Biology
MIT

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20 years of experience
B.A. in Human Biology
University of Manchester

"I can handle most tasks, including resumes and applications for college and graduate studies. "

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15 years of experience
B.A. in Human Biology
California Berkeley

"I like to put my language skills to good use on essays from all fields, but especially those in Medicine and Business."

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8 years of experience
B.A. in Human Biology
University of Oxford

I love supporting students with admissions essays, cover letters, academic essays, theses and dissertations.

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Kiran S. - a member of the Team Essay Editors at EssayEdge Kiran S.
11 years of experience
B.A. in Human Biology
University of Oxford

" I am experienced editing admissions essays, recommendation letters, as well as academic papers and theses."

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17 years of experience
B.A. in Human Biology
Stanford University

"I enjoy getting to know my customers and helping them reach their undergraduate and professional goals."

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3 years of experience
B.A. in Human Biology
Cornell University

"I have a deep love for the written word and have thoroughly enjoyed my time working with high schoolers to strengthen their writing skills."

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Mary F. - a member of the Team Essay Editors at EssayEdge Mary F.
11 years of experience
B.A. in Human Biology
Princeton University

"I have a great deal of experience assisting those applying to law school and LL.M. programs."

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4 years of experience
B.A. in Human Biology
Stanford University

"I have supervised undergraduate and graduate students and done more than my share of correcting, advising, and grading papers."

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30 years of experience
B.A. in Human Biology
Columbia University

"I find great joy and satisfaction in crafting precise language, and in helping people tell their stories with honesty and style"

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4 years of experience
B.A. in Human Biology
University of Oxford

"I am well versed in working with both undergraduate and graduate application essays."

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Scott J. - a member of the Team Essay Editors at EssayEdge Scott J.
23 years of experience
B.A. in Human Biology
University of North Carolina

"My goal is to work with customers and help present their ideas in their own words in a professional and grammatically sound manner."

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Steven G. - a member of the Team Essay Editors at EssayEdge Steven G.
8 years of experience
B.A. in Human Biology
University of Leicester

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Susan L. - a member of the Team Essay Editors at EssayEdge Susan L.
21 years of experience
B.A. in Human Biology
Harvard

"I enjoy helping clients tell their particular stories: who they are at heart and how they got to where they are now in their lives."

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12 years of experience
B.A. in Human Biology
Yale University

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9 years of experience
B.A. in Human Biology
Brown University

"I’m a hands-on writing and editing coach. Let's work together to create an essay that stands out from the pack! "

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Pricing Plans: Choose the Best Offer

Minimal prices for orders no longer than 600 words. Cost may slightly change in case of larger essays to be helped with

Proofreading

Turnaround - 48 hours

  • Service provides a check for typos and grammatical mistakes.
  • This service is the perfect fit for applicants with a near-final essay.
  • You will receive a final draft with a brief critique to enhance your essay.
from $69

+$59 for 24h rush order

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Standard

Turnaround - 48 hours

  • Service offers comprehensive editing.
  • Perfect fit if you are not a native English speaker or have some doubts about the essay's structure.
  • It includes one follow-up email to the editor, a recommendation around the essay's content and a fully proofread essay.
from $149

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+50% for second reading

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All in one

Turnaround - 7 days

  • Save 50% off your order!
  • Perfect choice if you need help with 3 - 5 different essays.
  • You will receive edited documents with recommendations on their structure and content.
from $229

+$119 for 72h rush order

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Premier

Turnaround - 14 days

  • Premier service will take you from the outline to the finished essay.
  • Two one-on-one consultations and 14 days of email interaction are included.
  • You will receive personalized guidance and an essay ready for submission.
from $379

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What Will You Get?
  • Cooperation with experts in editing from top US universities
  • Choosing the editor who corresponds to all your requirements and type of work
  • Text proofreading (including grammar and punctuation check)
  • Comments to improve the style of the text
  • Structure recommendations that correspond to the committee’s requirements
  • Improved tone and exposition
  • Formatting suggestions
  • Word count recommendations
  • Editor’s variants to improve the content and word choice