Sample College Essay and Graduate School Personal Statement Editing

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College | Graduate | MBA | Law | Medical | Academics

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College

Subject Matter: SwimmingBeforeAfter
Subject Matter: Overcoming a SetbackBeforeAfter

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Graduate

Subject Matter: Literature and CultureBeforeAfter
Subject Matter: EducationBeforeAfter
Subject Matter: Career AspirationsBeforeAfter

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MBA

Subject Matter: Ethical IssueBeforeAfter
Subject Matter: Leadership and TeamworkBeforeAfter
Subject Matter: GlobalizationBeforeAfter
Subject Matter: Career Path and Personal AchievementBeforeAfter
Subject Matter: Career Decisions & Significant EventsBeforeAfter

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Law

Subject Matter: Defying Gender RolesBeforeAfter
Subject Matter: Navy Seal TrainingBeforeAfter
Subject Matter: Mother TeresaBeforeAfter
Subject Matter: Difficult ChildhoodBeforeAfter
Subject Matter: Why Law? BeforeAfter

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Medical

Subject Matter: Alternative MedicineBeforeAfter
Subject Matter: Love for AnimalsBeforeAfter
Subject Matter: Residency ExperienceBeforeAfter

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Academics

Subject Matter: Social SciencesBeforeAfter
Subject Matter: BusinessBeforeAfter

 

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