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Sample College Essay and Graduate School Personal Statement Editing

The essays below showcase the benefits of an EssayEdge edit. The revisions are vastly improved in terms of grammar and technical writing issues, while the constructive critiques provide customers with valuable suggestions for further improvements. By reviewing these samples, you will come to understand what EssayEdge can do to help you enhance your application essay or personal statement.

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College


The client whose before and after essays are shown (to the right) rated our service an A+ and feels that it vastly improved his chances of admission.


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Subject Matter: Overcoming a Setback

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Graduate


The client whose before and after essays are shown (to the right) had an interesting life story made compelling and memorable.


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Subject Matter: Career Aspirations

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MBA


The client whose before and after essays are shown (to the right) had strong ideas, but his writing style was wordy, and full of grammar errors. EssayEdge transformed this essay into a winner.


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Subject Matter:
Career Decisions & Significant Events

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Law


The client whose before and after essays are shown (to the right) lacked the personal touch. EssayEdge helped him get personal anecdotes into the essay, which helped get the author into his choice of law school.


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Subject Matter: Why Law?

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Medical


The client whose before and after essays are shown (to the right) had a compelling story, but technical problems got in the way. EssayEdge helped her organize and clarify her writing, and she got into the medical school of her choice.


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Subject Matter: Residency Experience

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