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Sample College Essay and Graduate School Personal Statement Editing
Each of the edited essays listed below won admission to the client's first choice school. By comparing the dramatic differences between your essay before and after editing, you will understand what EssayEdge can do to help you enhance your application essay or personal statement. Let EssayEdge do the same thing for your essays.
College | Graduate | MBA | Law | Medical
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College
The client whose before and after essays are shown (to the right) was admitted to his first choice school...thanks to EssayEdge.
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Subject Matter: Father's Sickness
Graduate
The client whose before and after essays are shown (to the right) had an interesting life story made compelling and memorable.
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Subject Matter: Chemistry
MBA
The client whose before and after essays are shown (to the right) had strong ideas, but his writing style was wordy, and full of grammar errors. EssayEdge transformed this essay into a winner.
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Law
The client whose before and after essays are shown (to the right) lacked the personal touch. EssayEdge helped him get personal anecdotes into the essay, which helped get the author into his choice of law school.
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Subject Matter: Why Law?
Medical
The client whose before and after essays are shown (to the right) had a compelling story, but technical problems got in the way. EssayEdge helped her organize and clarify her writing, and she got into the medical school of her choice.
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Subject Matter: Residency Experience
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"The three EssayEdge editors I used were all excellent, getting deep into the detail of my essays and working to preserve my voice while offering invaluable insight into important issues of style and content. It was greatly reassuring to have my essays praised by editors whose understanding of what admissions officers look for was so much greater than my own. More importantly than the psychological benefit, the edits increased impact and improved flow, turning my unique experiences and abilities into compelling reading."
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