MBA Personal Statement Editing & Essay Proofreading Services

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Whether or not you come from a business background, your MBA application essay needs to be convincing, concise, and ultimately get the job done.

Why do you want an MBA, and why do you want to attend this particular school? EssayEdge editors can help you craft a memorable essay that hits these key points, with plenty of personality. You need to show the admissions committee your genuine value to the program, and you need to be personal, specific, and clear about it. Our editors can make sure each word in your essay counts, and that your personality and business acumen shine through.

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Sample Essay
My near-term career goal is to practice in business law. Ultimately, I aim to become a partner at a law firm or a chief legal officer for a corporation. Although I am already admitted at Osgoode, I feel that my goals will be achieved more effectively with knowledgeadditional tools acquired through thean MBA program, based on. This is confirmed through my recent work at Beijing Kangda Law Firm.
In one project, my team providedwas to offer legal advice for a bank’s past debt restructuring initiatives regardingto treat a non-performing loan. All the lawyers agreed that the bank inadequately evaluated the new borrower’s credit risk and followed improper procedures. (Our client, however, stressed that it was a treatment of a non-performing loan, rather than a loan on its own.) Since the securitization of the original loan reduced counterparty credit risk and meanwhile contributed to brought in future cash flow, the process was justified. From our communications with the client, I realized that knowing how to interpret the law per se is not sufficient to applyenough for applying it to the complex real-life business business practices. in real life. AdvancedA sound knowledge of business is important to understandfor understanding clients’ business issues, askasking relevant questions, and ultimately produceproducing good work.
Sample Essay
My near-term career goal is to practice in business law. Ultimately, I aim to become a partner at a law firm or a chief legal officer for a corporation. Although I am already admitted at Osgoode, I feel that my goals will be achieved more effectively with additional tools acquired through an MBA. This is confirmed through my recent work at Beijing Kangda Law Firm.
In one project, my team was to offer legal advice for a bank’s past debt restructuring initiatives to treat a non-performing loan. All the lawyers agreed that the bank inadequately evaluated the new borrower’s credit risk and followed improper procedures. Our client, however, stressed that it was a treatment of non-performing loan rather than a loan on its own. Since the securitization of the original loan reduced counterparty credit risk and meanwhile brought in future cash flow, the process was justified. From our communications with the client, I realized that knowing how to interpret the law per se is not enough for applying it to the complex business practices in real life. A sound knowledge of business is important for understanding clients’ business issues, asking relevant questions, and ultimately producing good work.
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Proofreading
from$69
  • For those with a near-final essay looking for a quick polish
  • An editor will proofread your work for typos and grammatical errors you may have missed
  • 48-hour turnaround, 24-hour rush option
  • Option to choose your editor (dependent on availability)
0-600 words$69
601-1200 words$99
1201-1800 words$129
1801-2400 words$159
+2400 words$12 per +100 words
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Standard
from$149
  • Combines proofreading with an expert critique to help you strengthen your writing
  • One constructive critique around structure, content and tone
  • Option to add on a second critique
  • 48-hour turnaround, 24-hour rush option
  • Option to choose your editor (dependent on availability)
0-600 words$149
601-1200 words$199
1201-1800 words$239
1801-2400 words$279
+2400 words$12 per +100 words
24-hour rush$59
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Premier
from$379
  • Most comprehensive - we'll guide you from topic brainstorm through finished essay
  • One brainstorm session and two rounds of critique
  • Two phone conversations with your editor
  • 14 days of email support from your editor
  • 2 week turnaround time (dependent on receiving customer questionnaire)
0-600 words$379
601-1200 words$429
1201-1800 words$479
1801-2400 words$529
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