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Perfect Motivation Letter Affects Your Admission Chances

A letter of motivation has a significant impact on your application. It is your chance to impress the admission committee and stand out from the crowd. That’s why even a minor mistake can spoil everything.

EssayEdge works to help you avoid such unfortunate situations. Your motivation statement will become a real masterpiece with our expert advice and professional services. Let’s start our cooperation to boost your chances of getting into your dream university!

What Makes a Good Motivation Letter?

A good motivation letter should correspond to all requirements. Moreover, it should help achieve your main goal—persuade the admission officers you are the applicant they are searching for. Apart from standard instructions, it’s better to consider several important nuances.

Here are the main features of a motivation letter that can attract the admissions committee’s attention:

  • Strong personal statement at the beginning to highlight your motivation. Applicants should demonstrate solid reasons with the help of a motivational statement to persuade the admission committee they are the right candidate.
  • Interesting hook to make the reader interested. Make sure that your motivation paragraph is engaging enough to stand out from the rest of the applicants.
  • Specific arguments to support your motivation. The reasoning is a working strategy to show that you are a fitting candidate for admission. Highlight your unique experience, qualifications, academic background, and skills.
  • Focus on your strengths. Mention the strong points that make you an ideal student for the chosen educational program. It is the best way to support your application motivation.
  • It should contain relevant information. Stay focused throughout the text and ensure that all data is related to the requirements of the chosen program.
  • The structure and format correspond to the requirements. These issues are as important as the content of the motivational letter. You need to make it look neat and professional.
  • The letter is free of any mistakes. It’s vital to proofread the letter before sending it to the admission committee. With our thorough editing and proofreading, you will be sure that everything is OK with your personal motivation statement, and that you haven’t missed even a minor mistake.

Why Do You Need Professional Motivation Letter Editing?

EssayEdge works to make your admission dreams come true. With our expert motivational letter editing and proofreading services, you will boost your chances for admission. Our thorough proofreading helps make your letter a working tool to impress the admission committee.

What do our editors pay attention to while polishing your letter of motivation? Let’s look through the main issues:

  • Perfect grammar and punctuation. The editors will check the text and eliminate all errors or language inconsistencies.
  • Appropriate style and tone of voice. It’s essential to follow the formal style. In case of stylistic issues, our experts will provide some fitting alternatives.
  • Better word choice. After thorough editing, your motivational letter for university will be free of possible stylistic inconsistencies.
  • Well-organized letter of motivation structure. With the help of our editors’ professional advice, you will make your letter look neat and professional.
  • Applicable format and word choice. EssayEdge editing specialists will ensure that your letter of motivation format and word choice corresponds to the provided instructions.

What Makes Us the Best?

  • Team of the Best Editing Gurus. Most of our editors are graduates of Ivy League schools. So, they know working tips to impress the pickiest universities’ admission committees. Our experts share their experiences and useful advice on how to get into the most prestigious universities. Visit our blog to find a lot of interesting info.
    Besides, they are all native English speakers. So, you can be sure of the high quality of our services. You can look through the motivation letter samples to see the difference after the professional EssayEdge proofreading.
  • Legal Service. Using EssayEdge services is legal in the US and worldwide. We do NOT write anything instead of our Clients. Instead, we help improve the quality of admission papers (including the motivational letter to students). So, our services don’t violate admission requirements or academic integrity principles.
  • Personalized Approach to Every Client. We do NOT apply machine editing or grammar checkers. All editors check the admission docs manually. Also, we consider the specific requirements of each client, including the instructions provided by the chosen educational institution.
  • Respecting Your Unique Writing Style. Our editors work to make your motivation letter perfect without damaging your style of writing. We help to highlight your personality and make your admission papers outstanding.
  • Services That Fit Directly Your Needs. EssayEdge services fit many cases, no matter whether you want to check the motivation letter format and eliminate mistakes or need professional assistance from brainstorming to final submission. All you need is to choose the appropriate offer and wait for a perfect result.
  • Fast Reply from Support. In case of any questions, we are always ready to give you a helping hand. Our Support Team is available 24/7 and will do everything possible to solve your issue.

We Help Improve Motivational Letters for Different Degrees

EssayEdge experts work with a wide range of subjects and degrees. We will proofread your statement of motivation for different educational institutions corresponding to specific requirements.

College Motivation Letter

The main aim of the college motivation letter is to persuade the admissions committee that you fit the chosen program. With our help, you will be able to do it according to their expectations.

Motivation Letter for PhD

A PhD motivation letter requires a list of academic achievements and rich experiences to support your motivation. Professional assistance from editing gurus will help to ensure that everything is done according to admission requirements.

Graduate School Motivation Letter

We know how to make your motivation letter for graduate school look perfect. Whether it is a Master motivation letter or a letter of motivation for an internship, our specialists will work hard to make it neat and professional.

A Letter of Motivation for University

A motivation letter for university should highlight strong arguments and include your experience, skills, and qualities. EssayEdge editors will provide working advice on how to make it effective and eliminate possible mistakes.

MBA Motivation Letters

Your motivation letter for MBA is a powerful tool to get the invitation for the interview. With our service, you will boost your confidence and chances of succeeding in your application.

For which program do you need of Motivation Letter Editing Service?
Motivation Letter for Ph.D. Program
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Motivation Letter for Masters Program
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Motivation Letter for College
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Motivation Letter for Undergraduate
4.69%
Motivation Letter for Postgraduate
1.03%
Motivation Letter for Graduate Program
7.48%
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In addition to my polished essays, I also received constructive feedbacks on my motivations letter. Those were very helpful and enhanced the writing part of my document a lot!
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I can not tell you how much I appreciated my editor's help because I have been working on my motivation letter for months and felt like I couldn't get it the way I wanted it to be. Thank you!!! P.S. I actually sent my document into to two different services. I'm not even using the other one.
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Julia was wonderful to work with. I struggled for a long time with my motivation letter, but she took my thoughts and made them flow perfectly and the grammatical edits are always great.
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This service solves all the troubles of non- native speakers. Detailed explanations were great and just what I was looking for. And Anastasia was amazing in her edits and feedback.
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Instead of just telling me what sounded bad and good, I was given specific sentences to make the changes. The only thing I regret is that I didn't find this service earlier. Thank you, Essay Edge!
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Brown University
Brown University
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I was satisfied with your service because Mr.James advised me how to tell the information concisely to the admissions officer. He was quick to respond and helped me a lot!
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Princeton University
Princeton University
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I loved how the editor corrected my essay not only language wise, but also concept wise. She has suggested me to add another paragraph to strengthen my essay and also kindly offered a free review on the addition via email.
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Harvard University
Harvard University
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Linda was thorough and thoughtful in her comments making sure I would have a near final draft to submit due to the limited time I had before it's due. And her feedback was the best!
January 2020
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Stanford University
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In addition to my polished essays, I also received constructive feedbacks on my motivations letter. Those were very helpful and enhanced the writing part of my document a lot!
April 2022
Kevin T.
University of Pennsylvania
University of Pennsylvania
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I can not tell you how much I appreciated my editor's help because I have been working on my motivation letter for months and felt like I couldn't get it the way I wanted it to be. Thank you!!! P.S. I actually sent my document into to two different services. I'm not even using the other one.
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Lauren M.
Cornell University
Cornell University
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Julia was wonderful to work with. I struggled for a long time with my motivation letter, but she took my thoughts and made them flow perfectly and the grammatical edits are always great.
September 2021
Julia C.
Duke University
Duke University
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This service solves all the troubles of non- native speakers. Detailed explanations were great and just what I was looking for. And Anastasia was amazing in her edits and feedback.
August 2021
Michael Z.
Yale University
Yale University
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Instead of just telling me what sounded bad and good, I was given specific sentences to make the changes. The only thing I regret is that I didn't find this service earlier. Thank you, Essay Edge!
November 2021
Amelia B.
Brown University
Brown University
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I was satisfied with your service because Mr.James advised me how to tell the information concisely to the admissions officer. He was quick to respond and helped me a lot!
May 2022
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EssayEdge editors will make your essay free of grammatical and punctuation mistakes. Our specialists focus on eliminating all errors, weaknesses, and possible inconsistencies, preserving your unique voice at the same time.
Law always has fasinating questions presents fascinating questions that need to be answered, and I find myself Enjoying thoroughly enjoy the process of investigating and answering these continuous questions.
GoingSUGGESTIONGoing → Making this change without those skills was a huge problem. When freshman year ended, I had learned how to study, formed relationships with my teachers, and developed a processSUGGESTIONProcess → Method to effectively manageSUGGESTIONEffectively manage my time → Manage my time effectively my time.
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The professional guidance and recommendations of our editors aim to boost the quality of your text. Together with editing and proofreading services, EssayEsge editors give useful advice on how to improve your admission paper according to the requirements of the chosen educational institution.
“I believe that doctors not only need to help the patients get cured from their disease but also need to make sure the patient is feeling comfortable there.” Editor’s recommendation:Phrases like “I think that” or “I believe that” act as unnecessary qualifiers in your writing. Simply state your ideas as fact, and your writing becomes more persuasive.
YOUR STATEMENT
EDITOR’S CRITIQUE[Paragraph 1] Mom and Dad In the descriptions of your parents, the capitalization scheme has been adapted to reflect mainstream usage. When you refer to a parent using a pronoun (e.g. "my mom," "my dad"), the word "mom" or "dad" remains in lower case. But when you refer to a parent using the word "Mom" or "Dad" as a name (e.g. "I knew this...
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I need to write a personal statement that shows my experiences contributed to my decision to pursue a career in healthcare. What should I include and how should I start? EDITORI recommend that you include some deeper discussion of what your training thus far has been like. You frequently express your joy and contentment, but I encourage you to provide more detail about study or practice experiences that you had that confirmed your decision and demonstrated your skill, not just your delight. Once you were actually in your chosen field, how did what you experienced build on your commitment? Did you find another mentor or other inspiring figures beyond your friend’s father?

WHAT DOES A SAMPLE LOOK LIKE?

Admission committees take this type of letters very seriously. Your motivation letter or motivation statement is supposed to describe both your professional/scientific competence and personal reasons to choose a particular field or a particular school, college, or university.

Contact information

Include the name of the recipient, the name of the university, the address and location.

Body Paragraph 1

Introduce yourself to the person you are addressing the letter to.

Body Paragraph 2

What makes you a suitable candidate? Include certain qualities, relevant experience or projects you have taken part in.

Body Paragraph 3

What do you hope to learn or develop while studying this program? What are your career ambitions?

Body Paragraph 4
Obligatory closing used in motivation letter setting.
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