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Role Model Essay Editing Service

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Anastasia has been very professional and helpful. She helped me brainstorm ideas and cut down on unnecessary parts. I would recommend working with Anastasia and EssayEdge to anyone seeking to write a concise and neat essay.
July 2021
John N.
Duke University
Duke University
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The critics were good that made my essay stronger. What really helped was that I could discuss with the editor changes she suggessted and receive a feedback less than in 24 hours.
September 2022
Ken T.
Stanford University
Stanford University
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Amy really helped me with my problems as a foreign English speaker, she did exactly what I need, correcting my wordings and making it more compelling. Thanks a lot for her help.
April 2020
Helen L.
Duke University
Duke University
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Mary returned my essays much ahead of deadline. Her editing is great, making my cover letter a lot better. She is very responsible as well! I also like her critique very much, very detailed and encouraging. Thanks, Mary!
June 2022
Lauren M.
Brown University
Brown University
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Very thankful for the editing service. There were certain errors I made that I would not have caught if it wasn't for my editor. My essay is more clear and I am very happy with the turnout and friendly attitude. Thanks!
June 2022
Stanley S.
Rice University
Rice University
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Instead of just telling me what sounded bad and good, I was given specific sentences to make the changes. The only thing I regret is that I didn't find this service earlier. Thank you, Essay Edge!
November 2021
Amelia B.
Brown University
Brown University
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The language sounded more professional after edits of my essay. I had a couple of email exchanges with my editorfor further clarification and improvement. Great service and professional editors.
October 2020
Rachel X.
Yale University
Yale University
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My experiences with EssayEdge are always wonderful they provide an editing service which I cannot get from my university. The editors I have worked with have provided great feedback and have improved on the flow of my writing significantly.
March 2022
Nathan S.
Emory University
Emory University
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Anastasia has been very professional and helpful. She helped me brainstorm ideas and cut down on unnecessary parts. I would recommend working with Anastasia and EssayEdge to anyone seeking to write a concise and neat essay.
July 2021
John N.
Duke University
Duke University
10/10 service rate
The critics were good that made my essay stronger. What really helped was that I could discuss with the editor changes she suggessted and receive a feedback less than in 24 hours.
September 2022
Ken T.
stanford
Stanford University
9/10 service rate
Amy really helped me with my problems as a foreign English speaker, she did exactly what I need, correcting my wordings and making it more compelling. Thanks a lot for her help.
April 2020
Helen L.
Duke University
Duke University
10/10 service rate
Mary returned my essays much ahead of deadline. Her editing is great, making my cover letter a lot better. She is very responsible as well! I also like her critique very much, very detailed and encouraging. Thanks, Mary!
June 2022
Lauren M.
Brown University
Brown University
10/10 service rate
Very thankful for the editing service. There were certain errors I made that I would not have caught if it wasn't for my editor. My essay is more clear and I am very happy with the turnout and friendly attitude. Thanks!
June 2022
Stanley S.
Rice University
Rice University
9/10 service rate
Instead of just telling me what sounded bad and good, I was given specific sentences to make the changes. The only thing I regret is that I didn't find this service earlier. Thank you, Essay Edge!
November 2021
Amelia B.
Brown University
Brown University
9/10 service rate
The language sounded more professional after edits of my essay. I had a couple of email exchanges with my editorfor further clarification and improvement. Great service and professional editors.
October 2020
Rachel X.
Yale University
Yale University
9/10 service rate
My experiences with EssayEdge are always wonderful they provide an editing service which I cannot get from my university. The editors I have worked with have provided great feedback and have improved on the flow of my writing significantly.
March 2022
Nathan S.
Emory University
Emory University
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How Can EssayEdge Improve Your Role Model Essay?

Perfect Grammar & Punctuation
EssayEdge editors will make your essay free of grammatical and punctuation mistakes. Our specialists focus on eliminating all errors, weaknesses, and possible inconsistencies, preserving your unique voice at the same time.
Law always has fasinating questions presents fascinating questions that need to be answered, and I find myself Enjoying thoroughly enjoy the process of investigating and answering these continuous questions.
GoingSUGGESTIONGoing → Making this change without those skills was a huge problem. When freshman year ended, I had learned how to study, formed relationships with my teachers, and developed a processSUGGESTIONProcess → Method to effectively manageSUGGESTIONEffectively manage my time → Manage my time effectively my time.
Brilliant Stylistics
Our editors highlight the importance of tone and exposition in your essay. They will make the vocabulary check, considering all specific language constructions to make your essay written like a native.
Expert Comments and Recommendations
The professional guidance and recommendations of our editors aim to boost the quality of your text. Together with editing and proofreading services, EssayEsge editors give useful advice on how to improve your admission paper according to the requirements of the chosen educational institution.
“I believe that doctors not only need to help the patients get cured from their disease but also need to make sure the patient is feeling comfortable there.” Editor’s recommendation:Phrases like “I think that” or “I believe that” act as unnecessary qualifiers in your writing. Simply state your ideas as fact, and your writing becomes more persuasive.
YOUR STATEMENT
EDITOR’S CRITIQUE[Paragraph 1] Mom and Dad In the descriptions of your parents, the capitalization scheme has been adapted to reflect mainstream usage. When you refer to a parent using a pronoun (e.g. "my mom," "my dad"), the word "mom" or "dad" remains in lower case. But when you refer to a parent using the word "Mom" or "Dad" as a name (e.g. "I knew this...
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Critique Part
EssayEdge editors emphasize the weaknesses and flaws of your essay. A detailed critique of each paragraph that offers writing suggestions based on what your editor corrected and constructive recommendations will help you further enhance the essay on your own.
Brainstorming Session
Do not have any idea on how to start your essay? With our Premier package, you will get a PRO service offering a personalized approach to the Client. During one-to-one consultation, the editor will help formulate your ideas according to the topic and type of admission document.
CLIENT
I need to write a personal statement that shows my experiences contributed to my decision to pursue a career in healthcare. What should I include and how should I start? EDITORI recommend that you include some deeper discussion of what your training thus far has been like. You frequently express your joy and contentment, but I encourage you to provide more detail about study or practice experiences that you had that confirmed your decision and demonstrated your skill, not just your delight. Once you were actually in your chosen field, how did what you experienced build on your commitment? Did you find another mentor or other inspiring figures beyond your friend’s father?

WHAT DOES A SAMPLE LOOK LIKE?

This essay is about the person who inspires you the most. Your main aim is to tell why he/she is so influential for you and how this person affected your personality development.

Introduction

Introduce the person who inspires you the most. You can start with an interesting hook to attract the reader’s attention. Highlight the main reason why he/she is so influential.

Body Paragraph 1

Discuss the qualities you admire the most. It’s important to be specific and provide an example for each trait.

Body Paragraph 2

Highlight how this person has affected your life. For example, you can tell how your role model helped you achieve the biggest goal.

Body Paragraph 2

Summarize the lessons you’ve learned thanks to your role model. Add strong arguments to show the person's impact on your personality growth.

Closing Paragraph
Finish your essay with some concluding remarks. Re-state the significance of the role model for your life.
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Yale University

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20 years of experience
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University of Manchester

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Minimal prices for orders no longer than 600 words. Cost may slightly change in case of larger essays to be helped with

Proofreading

Turnaround - 48 hours

  • Service provides a check for typos and grammatical mistakes.
  • This service is the perfect fit for applicants with a near-final essay.
  • You will receive a final draft with a brief critique to enhance your essay.
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Turnaround - 48 hours

  • Service offers comprehensive editing.
  • Perfect fit if you are not a native English speaker or have some doubts about the essay's structure.
  • It includes one follow-up email to the editor, a recommendation around the essay's content and a fully proofread essay.
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All in one

Turnaround - 7 days

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  • Perfect choice if you need help with 3 - 5 different essays.
  • You will receive edited documents with recommendations on their structure and content.
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Turnaround - 14 days

  • Premier service will take you from the outline to the finished essay.
  • Two one-on-one consultations and 14 days of email interaction are included.
  • You will receive personalized guidance and an essay ready for submission.
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  • Cooperation with experts in editing from top US universities
  • Choosing the editor who corresponds to all your requirements and type of work
  • Text proofreading (including grammar and punctuation check)
  • Comments to improve the style of the text
  • Structure recommendations that correspond to the committee’s requirements
  • Improved tone and exposition
  • Formatting suggestions
  • Word count recommendations
  • Editor’s variants to improve the content and word choice
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EssayEdge offers services ranging from proofreading to full critiques. Our Proofreading service includes a check for typos and grammatical errors and is best for those with a near-final essay. Our Standard service combines proofreading with a constructive critique based on your essay’s structure, content, and tone. Lastly, our Premier service is the most comprehensive. It includes proofreading and review, plus a brainstorming session, 2 phone conversations with your editor, and 14 days of email support.

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