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After failing multiple lines of chemotherapy, During my obstetrics and gynecology training, I was involved in the care of a patient who was initially diagnosed with a choriocarcinoma at another institution and was referred to the our center where I was completing my OBGYN training. after failing multiple lines of chemotherapy. The review of her initial pathological specimen revealed an epithelioid trophoblastic tumor, but which is primarily treated with surgery. Unfortunately, at this time the final diagnosis was too late, since she had unfortunately developed multiple metastases and sadly succumbed to advanced disease. She was the first patient that I witnessed to pass away because of a trophoblastic tumor and also served to me as an example of the key importance of pathologists in decision-making and patients care.
In my Throughout my experience as a physician, there have been numerous many were the cases that needed to be discussed with the Pathology team; , therefore, I grew to admire and be inspired by their work and knowledge. The challenges ing task of understanding and unraveling the diseases’ processes and following a path to the final diagnosis haves always fascinated me. This determination e eagerness to solve problems and explore the pathogenesis of diseases led me to be involved with research.
Sample Essay
During my obstetrics and gynecology training, I was involved in the care of a patient who was initially diagnosed with a choriocarcinoma at another institution and was referred to our center after failing multiple lines of chemotherapy. The review of her initial pathological specimen revealed an epithelioid trophoblastic tumor, which is primarily treated with surgery. Unfortunately, at this time the final diagnosis was too late, since she developed multiple metastases and sadly succumbed to advanced disease. She was the first patient that I witnessed to pass away because of a trophoblastic tumor and also served to me as an example of the key importance of pathologists in decision-making and patients care.
Throughout my experience as a physician, many were the cases that needed to be discussed with the Pathology team, therefore I grew to admire and be inspired by their work and knowledge. The challenging task of understanding and unraveling the diseases’ processes and following a path to the final diagnosis has always fascinated me. The eagerness to solve problems and explore the pathogenesis of diseases led me to be involved with research.
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