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Scholarship Essay Guide
This article contains three parts:
Step One: Brainstorming
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Scholarship essays vary dramatically in subject. However, most of them
require a recounting of personal experience. These tips will be more helpful for
writing personal essays, like for the National Merit Scholarship, than for
writing academic essays.
The most important aspect of your scholarship essay is the subject matter.
You should expect to devote about 1-2 weeks simply to brainstorming ideas. To
begin brainstorming a subject idea consider the following points. From
brainstorming, you may find a subject you had not considered at first.
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What are your major
accomplishments, and why do you consider them accomplishments? Do not
limit yourself to accomplishments you have been formally recognized for
since the most interesting essays often are based on accomplishments that
may have been trite at the time but become crucial when placed in the
context of your life. This is especially true if the scholarship committee
receives a list of your credentials anyway.
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Does any attribute, quality, or
skill distinguish you from everyone else? How did you develop this
attribute?
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Consider your favorite books,
movies, works of art, etc. Have these influenced your life in a meaningful
way? Why are they your favorites?
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What was the most difficult
time in your life, and why? How did your perspective on life change as a
result of the difficulty?
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Have you ever struggled
mightily for something and succeeded? What made you successful?
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Have you ever struggled
mightily for something and failed? How did you respond?
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Of everything in the world,
what would you most like to be doing right now? Where would you most like
to be? Who, of everyone living and dead, would you most like to be with?
These questions should help you realize what you love most.
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Have you experienced a moment
of epiphany, as if your eyes were opened to something you were previously
blind to?
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What is your strongest, most
unwavering personality trait? Do you maintain strong beliefs or adhere to
a philosophy? How would your friends characterize you? What would they
write about if they were writing your scholarship essay for you?
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What have you done outside of
the classroom that demonstrates qualities sought after by universities? Of
these, which means the most to you?
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What are your most important
extracurricular or community activities? What made you join these
activities? What made you continue to contribute to them?
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What are your dreams of the
future? When you look back on your life in thirty years, what would it
take for you to consider your life successful? What people, things, and
accomplishments do you need? How does this particular scholarship fit into
your plans for the future?
If these questions cannot cure your writer's block, consider the following
exercises:
1. Ask for Help from Parents, Friends, Colleagues, etc.
If you cannot characterize yourself and your personality traits do not
automatically leap to mind, ask your friends to write a list of your five most
salient personality traits. Ask your friends why they chose the ones they did.
If an image of your personality begins to emerge, consider life experiences that
could illustrate these particular traits.
2. Consider your Childhood
While scholarship and aid officers are not interested in reading about your
childhood and are more interested in the last 2-4 years of your life, you might
consider events of your childhood that inspired the interests you have today.
Interests that began in childhood may be the most defining parts of your life,
even if you recently lost interest. For instance, if you experienced extreme
poverty, the death of a loved one, immigration, etc., you might want to
incorporate this into your scholarship essay. Analyze the reasons for your
interests and how they were shaped from your upbringing.
3. Consider your Role Models
Many applicants do not have role models and were never greatly influenced by
just one or two people. However, for those of you who have role models and
actually aspire to become like certain people, you may want to incorporate a
discussion of that person and the traits you admired into your scholarship or
financial aid application essay.
4. Read Sample Scholarship Essays and Admissions Essays
Before writing a poem, you would certainly read past poets. Before writing a
book of philosophy, you would consider past philosophers. In the same way, we
recommend reading sample application essays to understand what topics other
applicants chose. EssayEdge maintains an archive of over 100 free sample
application essays. Click
here to view sample essays
that worked.
5. Goal Determination
Life is short. Why do you want spend 2-6 years of your life at a particular
college, graduate school, or professional school? How is the degree necessary to
the fulfillment of your goals? When considering goals, think broadly. Few people
would be satisfied with just a career. How else will your education fit your
needs and lead you to a fulfilling life?
If after reading this entire page you do not have an idea for your essay, do
not be surprised. Coming up with an idea is difficult and requires time.
Actually consider the questions and exercises above. Without a topic you feel
passionate about, without one that brings out the defining aspects of you
personality, you risk falling into the trap of sounding like the 90 percent of
scholarship applicants who will write boring essays. The only way to write a
unique essay is to have experiences that support whatever topic you come up
with. Whatever you do, don't let the essay stress you out. Have fun with the
brainstorming process. You might discover something about yourself you never
consciously realized.
Good Luck!
Step Two - Selecting
an Essay Topic
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Having completed step one, you should now have a rough idea of the elements
you wish to include in your scholarship essay, including your goals, important
life experiences, research experience, diversifying features, spectacular
nonacademic accomplishments, financial need, etc. You should also now have an
idea of what impression you want to make on the scholarship committee.
You must now consider topics that will allow you to synthesize your important
personal characteristics and experiences into a coherent whole. While most
scholarship essays allow great latitude in topic selection, you must also be
sure to answer the questions that were asked of you. Leaving a lasting
impression on someone who reads 50 essays a day will not be easy, but we have
compiled some guidelines to help you get started.
Consider the following questions before proceeding:
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Have you selected a topic that
describes something of personal importance in your life, with which you
can use vivid personal experiences as supporting details?
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Is your topic a gimmick? That
is, do you plan to write your essay in iambic pentameter or make it funny.
You should be very, very careful if you are planning to do this. We
recommend strongly that you do not do this. Almost always, this is done
poorly and is not appreciated by the scholarship committee unless a
creative approach is explicitly recommended. Nothing is worse than not
laughing or not being amused at something that was written to be funny or
amusing.
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Will your topic only repeat
information listed elsewhere on your application? If so, pick a new topic.
Don’t mention GPAs or standardized test scores in your essay if they are
mentioned elsewhere.
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Can you offer vivid supporting
paragraphs to your essay topic? If you cannot easily think of supporting
paragraphs with concrete examples, you should probably choose a different
essay topic.
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Can you fully answer the
question asked of you? Can you address and elaborate on all points within
the specified word limit? If you plan on writing about something
technical, make sure you truly can back up your interest in a topic and
are not merely throwing around big scientific words. Unless you convince
the reader that you actually have the life experiences to back up your
interest in neurobiology, the reader will assume you are trying to impress
him/her with shallow tactics. Also, be sure you can write to the
scholarship officers and that you are not writing over their heads.
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Can you keep the reader's
interest from the first word. The entire essay must be interesting,
considering scholarship officers will probably only spend a few minutes
reading each essay.
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Is your topic overdone? To
ascertain this, peruse through old essays. EssayEdge's 100 free
application essays can help you do this. However, most topics are
overdone, and this is not a bad thing. A unique or convincing answer to a
classic topic can pay off big.
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Will your topic turnoff a large
number of people? If you write on how everyone should worship your God,
how wrong or right abortion is, or how you think the Republican or
Democratic Party is evil, you will not win the scholarship or aid award.
The only thing worse than not writing a memorable essay is writing an
essay that will be remembered negatively. Stay away from specific
religions, political doctrines, or controversial opinions. You can still
write an essay about Nietzsche's influence on your life, but express
understanding that not all intelligent people will agree with Nietzsche's
claims. Emphasize instead Nietzsche's influence on your life, and
not why you think he was wrong or right in his claims.
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In this vein, if you are
presenting a topic that is controversial, you must acknowledge counter
arguments without sounding arrogant.
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Will a scholarship officer
remember your topic after a day of reading hundreds of essays? What will
the officer remember about your topic? What will the officer remember
about you? What will your lasting impression be?
After evaluating your essay topics with the above criteria and asking for the
free opinions of EssayEdge editors, of your teachers or colleagues, and of your
friends, you should have at least 1-2 interesting essay topics. Consider the
following guidelines below.
1. If you are planning on writing an essay on how you survived poverty in
Russia, your mother's suicide, your father's kidnapping, or your immigration to
America from Asia, you should be careful that your main goal is to address your
own personal qualities. Just because something sad or horrible has happened to
you does not mean that you should win a scholarship. You don't want to be
remembered as the pathetic applicant. You want to be remembered as the applicant
who showed impressive qualities under difficult circumstances. It is for this
reason that essays relating to this topic are considered among the best. Unless
you only use the horrible experience as a lens with which to magnify your own
personal characteristics, you will not write a good essay.
2. "Diversity" is the biggest buzzword of the 1990's. For this
reason, so many applicants are tempted to declare what makes them diverse.
However, simply saying you are a black, lesbian female will not impress
scholarship officers in the least. While an essay incorporating this information
would probably be your best topic idea, you must finesse the issue by addressing
your own personal qualities and how you overcame stigma, dealt with social
ostracism, etc. If you are a rich student from Beverly Hills whose father is an
engineer and whose mother is a lawyer, but you happen to be a minority, an essay
about how you dealt with adversity would be unwise. You must demonstrate vividly
your personal qualities, interests, motivations, etc. Address specifically how
your diversity will contribute to the realm of campus opinion, the academic
environment, and the larger society.
3. Don't mention weaknesses unless you absolutely need to explain them
away. You want to make a positive first impression, and telling a scholarship
officer anything about drinking, drugs, partying, etc. undermines your goal.
EssayEdge editors have read more essays on ADD (Attention Deficit Disorder) than
we would ever have imagined. Why admit to weakness when you can instead showcase
your strengths?
4. Be honest, but not for honesty's sake. Unless you are a truly
excellent writer, your best, most passionate writing will be about events that
actually occurred. While you might be tempted to invent hardship, it is
completely unnecessary. Write an essay about your life that demonstrates your
personality.
Step Three: Writing the Essay,
Tips for Success
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Even seemingly boring topics can be made into exceptional scholarship
essays with an innovative approach. In
writing the essay you must bear in mind your two goals: to persuade the
scholarship officer that you are extremely worthy of receiving college
assistance and to make the officer aware that you are more than a GPA and a
standardized score, that you are a real-life, intriguing personality.
Unfortunately,
there is no surefire step-by-step method to writing a good essay. EssayEdge
editors at www.EssayEdge.com
will remake your essay into an awesome, memorable masterpiece, but every topic
requires a different treatment since no two essays are alike. However, we have
compiled the following list of tips that you should find useful while writing
your scholarship
essay.
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Answer
the Question. You can follow the next 12
steps, but if you miss the question, you will not win
the scholarship.
Be
Original. Even seemingly boring essay topics
can sound interesting if creatively approached. If writing about a
gymnastics competition you trained for, do not start your essay: "I
worked long hours for many weeks to train for XXX competition."
Consider an opening like, "Every morning I awoke at 5:00 to sweat,
tears, and blood as I trained on the uneven bars hoping to bring the state
gymnastics trophy to my hometown."
Be
Yourself. The
scholarship committee wants
to learn about you and your writing ability. Write about something
meaningful and describe your feelings, not necessarily your actions. If
you do this, your essay will be unique. Many people travel to foreign
countries or win competitions, but your feelings during these events are
unique to you. Unless a philosophy or societal problem has interested you
intensely for years, stay away from grand themes that you have little
personal experience with.
Don't
"Thesaurize" your Composition. For
some reason, students continue to think big words make good essays. Big
words are fine, but only if they are used in the appropriate contexts with
complex styles. Think Hemingway.
Use
Imagery and Clear, Vivid Prose. If
you are not adept with imagery, you can write an excellent essay without
it, but it's not easy. The application essay lends itself to imagery since
the entire essay requires your experiences as supporting details. Appeal
to the five senses of the scholarship officers.
Spend
the Most Time on your Introduction. Expect scholarship
officers to spend 1-2 minutes reading your essay. You must use your
introduction to grab their interest from the beginning. You might even
consider completely changing your introduction after writing your body
paragraphs.
scholarship
officer need not read the rest of your essay.
Create
Mystery or Intrigue in your Introduction.
It is not necessary or recommended that your first sentence give away
the subject matter. Raise questions in the minds of the scholarship
officers to force them to read on. Appeal to their emotions to make
them relate to your subject matter.
Body
Paragraphs Must Relate to Introduction. Your
introduction can be original, but cannot be silly. The paragraphs that
follow must relate to your introduction.
Use
Transition. Applicants continue to ignore
transition to their own detriment. You must use transition within
paragraphs and especially between paragraphs to preserve the logical flow
of your essay. Transition is not limited to phrases like "as a
result, in addition, while . . . , since . . . , etc." but includes
repeating key words and progressing the idea. Transition provides the
intellectual architecture to argument building.
Conclusions
are Crucial. The conclusion is your last
chance to persuade the reader or impress upon them your qualifications. In
the conclusion, avoid summary since the essay is rather short to begin
with; the reader should not need to be reminded of what you wrote 300
words before. Also do not use stock phrases like "in conclusion, in
summary, to conclude, etc." You should consider the following
conclusions:
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Expand
upon the broader implications of your discussion.
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Consider
linking your conclusion to your introduction to establish a sense of
balance by reiterating introductory phrases.
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Redefine
a term used previously in your body paragraphs.
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End
with a famous quote that is relevant to your argument. Do not try
to do this, as this approach is overdone. This should come naturally.
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Frame
your discussion within a larger context or show that your topic has
widespread appeal.
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Remember,
your essay need not be so tidy that you can answer why your little
sister died or why people starve in Africa; you are not writing a
"sit-com," but should forge some attempt at closure.
Do
Something Else. Spend a week or so away from
your draft to decide if you still consider your topic and approach
worthwhile.
Give
your Draft to Others. Ask editors to read
with these questions in mind:
clichés?
Do
I use transition appropriately?
Do
I use imagery often and does this make the essay clearer and more
vivid?
What's
the best part of the essay?
What
about the essay is memorable?
What's
the worst part of the essay?
What
parts of the essay need elaboration or are unclear?
What
parts of the essay do not support your main argument or are immaterial
to your case?
Is
every single sentence crucial to the essay? This MUST be the case.
What
does the essay reveal about your personality?
Could
anyone else have written this essay?
How
would you fill in the following blank based on the essay: "I want
to accept you to this college because our college needs more
________."
Revise,
Revise, Revise. You only are allowed so many
words; use them wisely. If H.D. Thoreau couldn't write a good essay
without revision, neither will you. Delete anything in the essay that does
not relate to your main argument. Do you use transition? Are your
introduction and conclusions more than summaries? Did you find every
single grammatical error?
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Allow
for the evolution of your main topic. Do not assume your subject must
remain fixed and that you can only tweak sentences.
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Editing
takes time. Consider reordering your supporting details, delete
irrelevant sections, and make clear the broader implications of your
experiences. Allow your more important arguments to come to the
foreground. Take points that might only be implicit and make them
explicit.
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Have
your Essay Professionally Edited. The
application essay is too important not to spend $50 for its
improvement. Editing houses like EssayEdge at
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will significantly improve your essay's style, transition, voice,
grammar, and tone; EssayEdge will also make content suggestions to
ensure your essay is unique and memorable.
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