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Lesson
Six: Editing and Revising
Even the best writers need to edit
their work. Their first drafts might be very strong already, but they can always
get better. You too will find aspects to improve during the editing process,
from broad content issues down to basic word choice.
Try to write a complete first draft
before you worry too much about editing. Otherwise you might find your
creativity hampered by your analytical side. Once you have a first draft
finished, set it aside for a few days or more if you have that luxury. When you
return to it with a fresh perspective, you will probably notice many problems
that did not occur to you before and recognize better ways of handling various
points.
Do not hesitate to edit at all levels, even if it means you'll be doing a lot of
rewriting. Throw out entire paragraphs if you can't recall what purpose they
were serving. Replace boring passages with vivid details, banal generalizations
with sharp insights. Cut and paste until you've achieved the optimal structure.
Fine-tune every sentence until it is clear, concise, and graceful.
Is there such a thing as over-editing? If you begin to lose sight of your goals
and can no longer distinguish between constructive and unconstructive changes,
then you may begin to detract from the freshness and strength of your essay. At
that point, the only course you can take is to set the essay aside again until
you can read it with a clear mind.
EssayEdge provides significant help with the editing and revising process.
Having edited tens of thousands of admissions essays, our Harvard-educated
editors can take a poor, boring essay and make it a powerful personal essay. We
will carefully edit the essay to improve the impact of the introduction and
conclusion, the logic and transition, the content, and the grammar. For more on
our services, please visit our editing section.
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Extra: Soliciting Feedback
All
writers rely on outside feedback. You may want to use friends,
family, and teachers as an initial resource before submitting your
essay for more hands-on editing by EssayEdge. While the people you
know can give you valuable suggestions based on their relationship
with you, EssayEdge offers a vital perspective in providing
objective criticism and expertise specific to the admissions
essay.
The following is an evaluative questionnaire for you to give your
readers along with the essay:
1. Did my opening paragraph capture your attention?
2. Did you find the statement as a whole to be interesting?
3. Did you find it to be well written?
4. Did it seem positive, upbeat?
5. Did it sound like me?
6. Do you regard it as an honest and forthright presentation of
who I am?
7. Did it seem to answer the question(s)?
8. Can you think of anything relevant that I might have
inadvertently omitted?
9. Is there material within the statement that seems
inappropriate?
10. Did you gain any insight about me from reading this?
11. Did you notice any typos or other errors?
12. Do you think the statement has in any way distinguished me
from other applicants?
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